tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7795888054848712437.post3024004562575227161..comments2024-03-28T13:06:17.320-04:00Comments on R's Loft: Cliches in Writing: What to Do About ThemRachelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08562571611447163663noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7795888054848712437.post-83457094611081352932017-06-06T10:00:25.115-04:002017-06-06T10:00:25.115-04:00Glad I could help. :)Glad I could help. :)Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08562571611447163663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7795888054848712437.post-12837274053953571282017-06-06T09:18:12.073-04:002017-06-06T09:18:12.073-04:00Thank you!
One of my MCs needs a reason why she ...Thank you! <br /><br />One of my MCs needs a reason why she would reject a guy just before she leaves for America from Ireland (just having the guy be a jerk/embarrasing to her wasn't good enough). That post on Jane Austen love triangles is just what I need. <br /><br />CatherineCatherine Hawthornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15373041928187510536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7795888054848712437.post-54060478359934030392017-06-06T08:23:00.613-04:002017-06-06T08:23:00.613-04:00I'm not much of an expert on love triangles, b...I'm not much of an expert on love triangles, but here are a few ideas. First off, you can simple remove one of two people in love with the character, or if they're necessary to the plot, change it so they don't love the character.<br />You could also try having one of the characters fall in love with someone else (doing that with the main character could be interesting) or having the person quickly decided which one they love and making the other character feel like a third wheel. Also check out this post from Ink and Quills- http://inkandquills.com/2016/02/27/how-to-write-a-love-triangle-like-jane-austen/<br />Hope this helps, and thanks for commenting.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08562571611447163663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7795888054848712437.post-44376880027223574832017-06-05T17:27:42.393-04:002017-06-05T17:27:42.393-04:00Any advice on how to modify/replace a love triangl...Any advice on how to modify/replace a love triangle?<br /><br />Catherine<br />catherinesrebellingmuse.blogspot.comCatherine Hawthornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15373041928187510536noreply@blogger.com